Saturday, August 4, 2007

Wandering Nowhere.....


Confronted the surrounding i acquired staggering and found myself placed “there”
At the desolated path pondered for a while and i found myself wandering “nowhere”

Uncontended and captivated by diluding green lure i decended again,
Visaged the eerie and descrete green chaim around,phenominally it stretched in all corners,
With diversity which was “rare”
Brought back the vision and again i found myself wandering “nowhere”

I had charged few steps ahead,with that insatiate passion lingering in my head,
All was demure and glittering “all around”
Callows were dawdling around it all,by stretching their adroit feathers,
And were creating that entrapturing “sound”

Trempling the green muffs filched away from their numerous acquirors by dominating nature i headed “ahead”
Turned back and i observed prints of my steps stralling towards me like the retinue,
Gazing for a while i looked ahead,with elaborated questions dwelling in my “head”

Mere ahead i acquainted bestial,but sober and entraptering creatures in each and every “place”
Mingling their sound with the lament of those gigantic eternal dwellers of that unending green “space”
Divided my attention and i again found myself “wandering nowhere”

I confronted numerous bands,as well as long and unending path,
But,i still strove to move ahead as i had still not witnessed the lot which was much more “fair”
Aweaired i proluded again,and still found myself wandering “nowhere”

Wind there was descrete,surroundings were really rare and “fair”,
Paced my pace a bit as the dull dark was lurking over the resplendent bright,showing signs of its advent everywhere,
Acquisitive to dominate all i observed it charging ahead,with consistancy leaving no one to “spare”

Went through the surroundings around,which i had destinated staggering all the way from “there”
I gaged few like me hastly measuring the route in the east,i gazed and gazed until they perished into the thin “air”
Observed and examined each and every thing out there,and i asked myself have i “wandered somewhere”

Confronted the surrounding i had acquired staggering all the from “there”
I proluded again tryig to scrape out of “there”
Stralling across the beaten path,pondered for a while and i found that i had come “wandering somewhere”.

10 comments:

Unknown said...

nice work dude...u really have way with words & u really can bring ur creative visualisatioln to life with ur words...keep it up!

Unknown said...

great work big bro...i can easily emnagine the path uwent about with those precise words....great going..post somemore of ur work.

Anonymous said...

nice poem dude...way to go


Ayush.

Santosh said...

hi! brother nice scenic description you have given out here.is it the same place of which you have displayed the pic in your blog?

Steven said...

nice job, why dont you try and go for publishing it.

swalay said...

Great yaar ...Keep it up !!

Anonymous said...

great work dude...keep it flowing

Jason

Anonymous said...

NICE POEM MAN....WELL WHERE ARE THE MANY MORES THAT U PROMISED...EAGERLY WAITING.


jATIN

Chetan said...

Wow!! Now ds poem clearly shows ur dreams n aspirations in life...seems there's sooo much u wanto achieve in life...All d best to u!!!

Aditya sah said...

gud mohit da !!!


Aditya sah